The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant.

Write atleast 150 words.
The table illustrates how much
rail
transportation was made in four nations: Malaysia,
Canada
,
China
, and UAE in 2007, compared with the categories namely
Number
of People using
rail
transport, Passenger
kilometers
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per head of population, and Cargo carried. Units were measured in the form of numbers.
Overall
, what stands out the most from the graph is that
China
has the highest
number
in
Number
of people using
rail
transport and Passenger
kilometers
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per head of population categories. The most significant difference in the
Number
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number
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of people using
rail
transport was found,
China
ranked the highest at 27 million,
while
Canada
had the lowest at 0.3 million. In terms of the given year 2007,
China
ranked first in the passenger
kilometers
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kilometres
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per head of population category, being at 1980, followed by UAE and Malaysia, having 780 and 770
kilometers
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respectively. The most marginal figure was found in
Canada
at 80
kilometers
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. With regards to the amounts of Cargo carried,
Canada
had the highest
number
at 28.20 billion tons, followed by
China
and Malaysia, having 23.01 and 22.2 billion tons, respectively. The most marginal amount was found in UAE, at 21.9 billion
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tons.
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