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The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.

The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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The table illustrates how much
rail
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 transportation was made in four nations: Malaysia,
Canada
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,
China
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, and UAE in 2007, compared with the categories namely
Number
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 of People using
rail
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 transport, Passenger
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kilometers
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 per head of population, and Cargo carried. Units were measured in the form of numbers.
Overall
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, what stands out the most from the graph is that
China
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 has the highest
number
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 in
Number
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 of people using
rail
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 transport and Passenger
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kilometers
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 per head of population categories. The most significant difference in the
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Number
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number
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 of people using
rail
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 transport was found,
China
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 ranked the highest at 27 million,
while
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Canada
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 had the lowest at 0.3 million. In terms of the given year 2007,
China
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 ranked first in the passenger
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kilometers
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 per head of population category, being at 1980, followed by UAE and Malaysia, having 780 and 770
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kilometers
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kilometres
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 respectively. The most marginal figure was found in
Canada
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 at 80
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kilometers
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. With regards to the amounts of Cargo carried,
Canada
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 had the highest
number
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 at 28.20 billion tons, followed by
China
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 and Malaysia, having 23.01 and 22.2 billion tons, respectively. The most marginal amount was found in UAE, at 21.9 billion
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tons.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words rail, canada, china, number, kilometers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "marginal" was used 2 times.
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