The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Those two graphs illustrate the proportion of
energy
consumption, alongside related gas generation in Australia.
Overall
, heating takes up the heighest
proportion Correct your spelling
highest
in
Change preposition
of
energy
use and production, while
those
figures for cooling are the lowestCorrect determiner usage
the
one
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Additionally
, compared to the percentage of energy
consumption, Australian people generate less pollution in heating, while
others have adverse trends.
It is clear from the pie charts that 42% of energy
consumption is made
by heating, Verb problem
caused
while
only 32% gas
dissemination is Change preposition
of gas
made
by it. Apart from that, the proportion of individuals Verb problem
caused
use
Correct pronoun usage
who use
energy
to
water heating is 30% but there are 32% Change preposition
for
pollution
generated from that.
Change preposition
of pollution
Moreover
, the most obivious
difference Correct your spelling
obvious
bewteen
those two charts happens in other appliances, with 15% in Correct your spelling
between
energy
using
and 28% in gas emissions. Apart from that, there Wrong verb form
use
are
Change the verb form
is
silght
Correct your spelling
slight
distinction
among cooling, lighting and refrigeration, which are below 15%.Fix the agreement mistake
distinctions
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