The table below gives information about rail transport in four countries in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and make comparisions where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
The table graph illustrates details about the railway system transportation in the following countries: ( United Arab Emirates, China,
Canada
and Malaysia) in the year of
2007.
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Overall
, it seems from the table that Canada
had the lowest amount of person's
using Change noun form
people
the
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apply
rail
transport
. However
, it carried the highest billions of tons
. Meanwhile, China had the highest number
of people with less cargo
carried.
To begin
with, Canada
had the least amount of humans using the
Correct article usage
apply
rail
transport
with 0.3 million
, 80 kilometres
per head
which is also
a decreased number
above all
the other countries. Although
, it had the highest Correct word choice
However
cargo
carried with a
28.20 Correct article usage
apply
bilion
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billion
of
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tons
. The following country is UAE, which was higher than Canada
with 5.5 million
of
people using Change preposition
apply
the
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rail
transport
. The passenger kilometres
was
780 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
kilometres
per head
and 21.9 billion which is the smallest number
above
all.
China had a huge total of humans using Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
rail
transport
accounting for 27 million
. In addition
to that, it had the longest passenger kilometres
per head
with a number
of 1980. But it had a lower cargo
carried with 23.01 billion of
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tons
. In terms of Malaysia, it was the second top usage by people in the railway which made up to 5.9 million
. it had a
770 passenger Correct article usage
apply
kilometres
per head
and 22.2 billions
of Fix the agreement mistake
billion
tons
cargo
carriedSubmitted by a-la-a-11 on
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