The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000.
The given bar chart
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
amount
of two main elements that give rise to the pollution in the air across 4 different commercial areas by 2000.
Add an article
the amount
Overall
, most
noticeable is how Correct article usage
the most
in
Los Angeles and Mexico Change preposition
apply
city
showed the number of N2O more than SO2, Capitalize word
City
while
in
the other cities took place the reverse situation. Change preposition
apply
Additionally
, all of cities
Add an article
the cities
in
around the world displayed modest Change preposition
apply
figure
with the exception of Mexico Fix the agreement mistake
figures
city
Capitalize word
City
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
double
.
With regards toWrong verb form
doubled
2
cities where they exposed the majority of N2O being populated. In terms of Los Angeles, Correct article usage
the 2
this
region contained N2O with max
at 104 and min at 39 micrograms per m3 which all overwhelm SO2 Correct article usage
a max
in
the same side. Meanwhile, min and max S02 were 113 and 207 micrograms per m3 in Mexico Change preposition
on
city
, respectively.
Turning toCapitalize word
City
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