The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Illustrating for consideration is information pertaining to the
tourists
who visited an Australian-specific holiday resort. From an observational perspective, the majority of
tourists
came from the US and Europe
while
the opposite was true for
Asian
and other regions
tourists
.
Additionally
,
Asian
and
American
tourists
have a relatively close interest
whereas
European
and other region visitors share a common preference. Regarding the pie chart,
European
and
American
travellers occupied the highest proportion of all, with 37% and 35% respectively. Below that were visitors from other regions with 18% and only one-tenth of the total were
Asian
tourists
. Turning to the table,
Asian
people normally spend a week on holiday but the duration is two times longer for
American
ones. It can be seen that
European
travellers travel for 16 days and other region travellers are 6 days shorter. In terms of accommodation, despite the
American
and
Asian
popular choices were 4-star and 5-star hotels,
European
and other regions prefer camping or caravan.
Lastly
,
although
the
Asian
and
American
main activity was sightseeing, it was swimming and sunbathing that Europeans enjoyed and surfing for other region
tourists
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, asian, american, european with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • comparison
  • spike
  • drop
  • correlation
  • seasonal variation
  • demographics
  • tourist influx
  • resort
  • holidaymakers
  • visitor statistics
  • notable changes
  • fluctuation
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • international tourists
  • domestic tourists
  • external factors
  • economic conditions
  • political climate
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