You are organizing a conference for your company. Write a letter to a colleague asking him/her to give a presentation during the conference. -Describe what this conference is about -Why you want him/her to give a presentation -Give details about the conference

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Dear jay, I am writing

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letter with regard to draw your attention towards the upcoming conference, which is held on next Saturday on 25th June and I am expecting you to give a detailed presentation about our organization.

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with, you already know that, we have an annual conference every year to celebrate our victories in the previous year and

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welcome new members.

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year it is my responsibility to handle

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event

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, I am asking you to prepare the PowerPoint presentation and present it on that day.

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, you have been working in

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company for the

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three years and you deserve

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opportunity.

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, you know about all the ins and outs of our business,so in my view , no one is better than you for

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presentation.

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event is being held on 25th June and I need your answer as soon as possible,so I can confirm other things from my side. Please feel free to contact me for

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information. Yours sincerely, Parth

pp6859Thu May 30 2024

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coherence cohesion

Improve the logical flow of the letter by organizing the information more clearly and cohesively. You could separate the paragraphs more distinctly, each focusing on one key point.

task achievement

Ensure the tone remains professional yet warm throughout the letter to maintain a polite and engaging appeal to your colleague.

task achievement

The letter provides a clear explanation about the conference and why you want your colleague to give a presentation.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and help to frame the letter professionally.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph addresses a specific point, enhancing clarity and readability.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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