You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar

chart

and pie

chart

compares

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compare

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between

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apply

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the rate of

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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who

attending

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attend

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many evening programmes education which an education

center

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centre

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during

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in

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2009

in addition

shows

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show

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information

around

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about

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the older of these

courses

.

Overall

, the

depict

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depiction

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chart

shows 4 types of

courses

it

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apply

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namely drama , painting , sculpture and language

moreover

it is clear that

the

number

of languages

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among female

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female

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females

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was the highest

number

in contrast

the rate of sculpture

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among woman

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woman

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women

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was the lowest rate .

While

the pie

chart

the largest

number

was above 50 years

whereas

the lowest per cent was under 20 years . First of all , in the

chart

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,

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the women

was

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were

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double

number

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the number

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than

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of

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the

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apply

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men who attended drama

courses

.

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For painting

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Painting

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For painting

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courses

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for woman's

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for woman's

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woman's

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women's

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they

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apply

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reach

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reached

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apply

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to

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apply

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30

while

the painting

courses

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for men's

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for men's

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men

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men's

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men

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apply

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they

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apply

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reach

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reached

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approximately 25

number

then

there

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apply

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are

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apply

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suddenly

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a downward

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downward

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a downward

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which women and men

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in

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among

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in

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evening

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courses

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course

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courses

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after that the women who

attend

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attended

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courses

language

was reach

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reached

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to top

number

it

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apply

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was

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apply

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double

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a double

the double

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number

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apply

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of

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apply

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mela

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the mela

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.