the table and pie chart show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.

the table and pie chart show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.
Contained in the given infographics is data pertaining to the number of research
students
in Australian educational institutions in two distinct years, 2001 and 2010. In general, the most noticeable change related to the considerable proportion of local
students
in both years.
Additionally
,
due to
the new - recruiting of more global
students
, the number of international ones experienced growth, respectively. In terms of the table's data, it is apparent that local
students
accounted for 33,657, six times as many as international
students
in 2001.
In addition
, compared to global
students
, which stood at 14,593, Indigenous
students
registered a significantly higher figure at 39,488 in 2010.
As a result
,
this
gave rise to the large total of
students
with 54,081, which increased by 15,000
students
. Moving onto the pie charts, in 2001, local
students
took up over three fourth with 87%,
whereas
international
students
were just 13%. In more detail for percentage of the local, indigenous males was on par with local females at around 43-44% and non-local males were 5% larger than non-local females. In 2010, global
students
increased which accounted for a quarter, particularly, 15% for non-local females and 12% for non-local males. Meanwhile, there was a pretty equivalence of the proportion of local men and local women, 35% and 38%.
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