the line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph sets out the key motivations for people relocating to the capital of a specific country between 2000 and 2015. Moving for the purpose of
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saw the greatest rise
overall
, with a jump of approximately 62,000. It rose considerably in two periods from 2000 to 2005 (by 22,000), and
then
again from 2010 to 2015 (by 33,000), with a more gentle growth of around 7,000 in between.
Elsewhere
, the figure of people relocating for work began at 61,000 in 2000,
then
peaked at 92,000 in 2010-the highest of any reason, in any year- before
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the joint-highest in 2015 (87,000 - on a level with those relocating in order to study). Notably,
this
category was the only one of the four that underwent a downturn. Turning to 'adventure',
this
category rose the most stably and steadily of all four categories, from 11,000 to 15,000 over the fifteen-year period. Meanwhile, the number of people relocating for 'family and friends' reasons climbed gently in the first five years (12,000 to 14,000), followed by an upswing to 22,000, before eventually levelling off at around 23,000 in 2015. All in all, the graph tells us that, 'employment' aside, there was an increase in each of the four reasons for moving over the period in question, with the greatest rise occurring in those citing study as the main motivating factor.
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