The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the amount of teaching done by primary, lower secondary, and upper secondary
school
teachers
in four different countries in 2001.
Overall
, teachers
in the USA taught significantly more than teachers
in the remaining three countries. Furthermore
, upper secondary school
teachers
generally worked more hours
than other teachers
.
In 2001, upper secondary school
teachers
in the USA taught around 1100 hours
per year
. This
was closely followed by lower secondary school
teachers
, who did only slightly fewer than 1100 hours
, compared to U.S
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U.S.
school
teachers
, who taught less than 900 hours
per year
. In Ireland, both upper and lower secondary school
teachers
taught approximately 800 hours
per year
, while
their primary school
counterparts did around 600.
Meanwhile, both primary and lower secondary school
teachers
in Japan and Spain taught for approximately 600 hours
per year
in 2001. Similarly
, upper secondary school
teachers
in Japan also
only taught for around 600 hours
, while
their Spanish counterparts spent around 1000 hours
teaching per year
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