The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph compares the amount of teaching done by primary, lower secondary, and upper secondary
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, who taught less than 900 Use synonyms
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. In Ireland, both upper and lower secondary Use synonyms
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