Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them

There is often not enough time in the schedules of those who provide elder

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for the elderly. From my perspective, I hold to

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cure can decrease

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of health and the most effective solution is comprehensive and

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reform. One of the main reasons for the lack of time to look after the elderly face with the quality of

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decreased

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a number of patients, who might all require a special cure

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full time, must prioritise. Patients who no longer have relatives by their side are

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more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. In more severe reality, patients have an intellectual or brain disease, and their health

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good enough to continue healing,

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there may be serious

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. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A critically ill patient may need urgent

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and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency. These problems can be partly remedied if

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responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations, chiefly Asian countries like Japan, where old people are highly respected.

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permeates all levels of

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and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of

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more attentive doctors and better government-funded social welfare programs. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but

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shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect. In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of

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and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of

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. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.