The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.
The image shows a horizontal
bar
chart with data for 12 different countries across three categories:
Gold
,
Silver
, and
Bronze
. Data for each category is presented in separate, adjacent
bars
for each country, with numerical values extending from 0 up to 2,500. USA has the longest
bars
for
Gold
and
Silver
, extending past 2,000 and 1,500 respectively,
while
the
Bronze
bar
reaches 1,000. Soviet Union's
Gold
bar
extends to 1,000 and
Silver
to 500,
while
Bronze
is slightly less than 500. UK's
Gold
bar
is around 500, with
Silver
and
Bronze
bars
around 250 each. France's
Gold
bar
is around 250, and
Silver
and
Bronze
are around 150 each. Germany has
Gold
and
Silver
bars
near 750, and
Bronze
close to 500. Italy's
Gold
bar
reaches 500, with
Silver
at 250 and
Bronze
near 200. Sweden's
Silver
and
Bronze
bars
are near 150 and
Gold
is around 100. Australia's
Gold
bar
is around 250,
Silver
near 150, and
Bronze
close to 200. Hungary's
Gold
bar
is close to 400,
Silver
near 250, and
Bronze
past 200. East Germany has
Gold
and
Silver
bars
just past 400 and
Bronze
at 250. Japan's
Gold
is just over 200,
Silver
around
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100, and
Bronze
over
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50. China's all three
bars
are close to the starting point, with
Gold
,
Silver
, and
Bronze
around 50 each.
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