The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart above illustrates the
number
of male and female university graduates
in Canada between 1992 and 2007.
Overall
, the graph shows a positive trend for both males and females. However
, the number
of female graduates
in Canada is consistently higher than that of males throughout the period. There is a significant difference between the two data sets.
To begin
with, the total number
of male graduates
in 1992 was around 70,000, which then
increased to 75,000 the following year before dropping to 71,000 the next year. From 2002 onwards, the graph soared, reaching a maximum of 90,000 graduates
by the end of 2006. On the other hand
, the number
of female graduates
in 1992 was around 99,000, which leveled
up to 102,000 in 1994 and remained constant for a Change the spelling
levelled
while
. From 2000 onwards, the number
of female graduates
surged to 110,000, then
to 130,000 in 2004, finally
reaching 149,000 in 2006.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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