The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The given process illustrates the cycle of
water
.
Overall
, it can be seen that
this
is a natural process which commences from
water
is evaporated
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evaporates
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from oceans before falling as rain and running back into the oceans. In the initial stage, the heat from the sun makes
water
evaporate to create
water
vapour. It is estimated that 80% of
water
vapour is contributed to the air.
Next,
in the high cold layer of the earth,
this
water
is condensed to form the cloud. Focus on the subsequent stage,heavy clouds fail as precipitation, so the
water
is poured into the lakes or contributes to surface runoff. Simultaneously, the
water
from melted snow goes through the ground to the surface runoff. By
this
stage, surface runoff which creates groundwater flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. Eventually, there is
salt
Correct your spelling
saltwater
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water
intrusion where
water
from the ocean moves to the fresh
water
on the land.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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