The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
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The given process illustrates the cycle of
water
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.
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, it can be seen that
this
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is a natural process which commences from
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is evaporated
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from oceans before falling as rain and running back into the oceans. In the initial stage, the heat from the sun makes
water
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evaporate to create
water
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vapour. It is estimated that 80% of
water
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vapour is contributed to the air.
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in the high cold layer of the earth,
this
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water
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is condensed to form the cloud. Focus on the subsequent stage,heavy clouds fail as precipitation, so the
water
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is poured into the lakes or contributes to surface runoff. Simultaneously, the
water
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from melted snow goes through the ground to the surface runoff. By
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stage, surface runoff which creates groundwater flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer. Eventually, there is
salt
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saltwater
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water
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intrusion where
water
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from the ocean moves to the fresh
water
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on the land.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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