The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
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Presented for consideration is a bar chart detailing figures for the proportion of people who passed their
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driving in a specific country from 1980 to 2010, broken down by gender.  Generally speaking, the rate of females passing their driving
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than the remaining sex throughout the timescale.
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, the percentage of both genders in 2000 was higher than any other category,
while
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the opposite was true for the proportion in 1980.  Looking at the chart in
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detail in the two years which had the highest rate of passer in the driving
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. In regards to women, there was approximately 69% of them met the requirements of the
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in 2000 compared to only about half of men in the same year. Concerning 2010, during
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period, the proportion of males who passed the
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driving was identical to the one in 2000,
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the rate of females was just over 62%. Turning to the first two years, 1980 and 1990, where the rates of passing the driving
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were lower than the following years. Regarding women, the percentage of individuals who passed the
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was more than 47% and 51% in 1980 and 1990, respectively. With the other genders, the rates were just over a quarter in 1980 and about 48% in the final year.
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