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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given infographic illustrates the cycle of plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, it can be observed that recycling is a
continously
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continuous
continuously
 process which
contained
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contains
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total
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a total
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 of 9 main
step
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steps
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, commencing at
bottles
 are put into
bin
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a bin
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 and terminated at making end products. The cycle started
at
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with
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 plastic jugs used by residents in different ways
are
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were
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 thrown into repurpose
bin
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bins
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 where they
later
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were later
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 loaded
into
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onto
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 a lorry to transfer to
recycling
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the recycling
a recycling
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 centre. One inside, the workers
are
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apply
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seperated
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separate
bottles
 by
colors
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color
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 and materials into
a
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apply
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varies
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various
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 of category to prepare for for
renewing
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renewal
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 steps. Looking at the remaining stages, it is evident that processed
bottles
 are compressed by a special machine to reshape
into
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them into
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 blocks .
Then
 the blocks are passed through the milling step
inwhich
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in which
 the saws
crushed
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 the cubes into several small pieces and washed in
an
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a
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 unique liquid to remove unwanted materials. After that processed plastic pieces are put into the
pellets making
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pellets-making
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 machine to produce pellets which
lated
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are
 heated
with
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at
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 a sustainable temperature to form raw material used to produce end products for consumming
purpose
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purposes
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then
 the process
start
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starts
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 again.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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