The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given infographic illustrates the cycle of plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, it can be observed that recycling is a
continously
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continuous
continuously
process which
contained
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total
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of 9 main
step
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, commencing at
bottles
are put into
bin
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a bin
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and terminated at making end products. The cycle started
at
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with
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plastic jugs used by residents in different ways
are
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were
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thrown into repurpose
bin
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bins
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where they
later
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loaded
into
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onto
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a lorry to transfer to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre. One inside, the workers
are
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apply
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seperated
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separate
bottles
by
colors
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color
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and materials into
a
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apply
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varies
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of category to prepare for for
renewing
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renewal
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steps. Looking at the remaining stages, it is evident that processed
bottles
are compressed by a special machine to reshape
into
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them into
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blocks .
Then
the blocks are passed through the milling step
inwhich
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in which
the saws
crushed
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the cubes into several small pieces and washed in
an
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unique liquid to remove unwanted materials. After that processed plastic pieces are put into the
pellets making
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pellets-making
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machine to produce pellets which
lated
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are
heated
with
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at
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a sustainable temperature to form raw material used to produce end products for consumming
purpose
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purposes
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then
the process
start
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starts
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again.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collection
  • recycling centers
  • transported
  • recycling plant
  • sorted
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • shredded
  • flakes
  • melted
  • pellets
  • raw material
  • manufacturing
  • containers
  • clothing
  • recycling loop
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