The graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of England’s tourists who joined
in
four destinations in Brighton from 1980 to 2010.
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Overall
, it can be observed that tourists who visited the Linking Words
Pavillion
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as well as
the Pier increased Linking Words
whereas
that of the Festival and Art Gallery saw a decrease, Linking Words
moreover
, the Linking Words
Pavillion
was still the most visited destination, Use synonyms
although
it had a drop throughout the years. It should Linking Words
additionally
be mentioned how Linking Words
Pavillion
replaced Festival to be the place that was visited the most, Use synonyms
although
, in the initial years, Festival was the most visited one.
Regarding the 2 destinations, which had an increase in tourists, Pier and Linking Words
Pavillion
had roughly 10% and 25% in the first year, respectively. In terms of Pier’s Use synonyms
visitors
, it fluctuated until 2000, Use synonyms
then
rose gradually to exceed Art Gallery at around 20% Linking Words
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
Likewise
, Linking Words
Pavillion
’s Use synonyms
visitors
rose slightly from 25% to 28% between 1980 and 1985, Use synonyms
then
it grew dramatically until 1995, reaching a peak at nearly 45% by that time, where it Linking Words
then
had a decrease from 1995 to 2010, ending with approximately 30%.
Turning towards the places whose Linking Words
visitors
saw a decrease. In 1980, the Festival had the highest number of Use synonyms
visitors
of the four attractions in Brighton at nearly 30%, Use synonyms
however
, it Linking Words
then
dropped steadily to nearly 27% by 2010. Meanwhile, the Art Gallery’s travellers rose dramatically from 1985 to 1995, reaching nearly 21%. In 1995, it continued going down considerably until 2010, Linking Words
then
ending with less than 10% making it the least visited destination Linking Words
in
the four.Change preposition
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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