The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .
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The pie chart gives information about the employment status of Anthropology
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from a particular university after completing their undergraduate degree course,
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the table illustrates how much the anthropologists in three different types of employment got paid after five years.
Overall
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the percentage of folklore alumna doing full-time effort after receiving their undergraduate degree was highest, the opposite was true for those choosing part-time
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and postgraduate study.
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, after 5
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of work, the proportions of anthropologists working as freelance consultants and in the ministry region with the lowest salary range were exactly the same,
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the highest figure can be seen in the proportion of those working in the authorities sector with the highest-paid. Regarding the pie chart, more than half of sociology graduates had a full-time job,
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52%,
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the proportions of those only working part-time and the unemployed were significantly lower, at only 15% and 12% respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for sociology
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choosing full-time postgraduate study and the unknown group were identical, at 8%,
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only 5% of
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majoring in Anthropology chose to do part-time work and pursue postgraduate study at the same time.
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, Regarding the table, Anthropology
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with a salary range between 25.000 and 49.999 dollars accounted for the smallest proportion of those working as freelance consultants and in the union part after 5 years, at only 5%, which was half the figure for private companies.
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, the percentages of those working as freelance consultants, in the state sector and in private companies with the most generous salary were considerably higher, at 40%, 50% and 30% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
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