The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .
The pie chart gives information about the employment status of Anthropology
alumnus
from a particular university after completing their undergraduate degree course, Fix the agreement mistake
alumni
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however
the table illustrates how much the anthropologists in three different types of employment got paid after five years.
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however,
Overall
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while
the percentage of folklore alumna doing full-time effort after receiving their undergraduate degree was highest, the opposite was true for those choosing part-time Linking Words
endeavor
and postgraduate study. Change the spelling
endeavour
Furthermore
, after 5 Linking Words
year
of work, the proportions of anthropologists working as freelance consultants and in the ministry region with the lowest salary range were exactly the same, Change to a plural noun
years
while
the highest figure can be seen in the proportion of those working in the authorities sector with the highest-paid.
Regarding the pie chart, more than half of sociology graduates had a full-time job, Linking Words
at
52%, Change preposition
apply
whereas
the proportions of those only working part-time and the unemployed were significantly lower, at only 15% and 12% respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for sociology Linking Words
grad
choosing full-time postgraduate study and the unknown group were identical, at 8%, Fix the agreement mistake
grads
whereas
only 5% of Linking Words
recipient
majoring in Anthropology chose to do part-time work and pursue postgraduate study at the same time.Fix the agreement mistake
recipients
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,
Regarding the table, Anthropology Linking Words
doctor
with a salary range between 25.000 and 49.999 dollars accounted for the smallest proportion of those working as freelance consultants and in the union part after 5 years, at only 5%, which was half the figure for private companies. Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
By contrast
, the percentages of those working as freelance consultants, in the state sector and in private companies with the most generous salary were considerably higher, at 40%, 50% and 30% respectively.Linking Words
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