The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.

The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.
The bar chart illustrates the students' preference for the five different
subjects
,
while
the two middle
schools
compare each other.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are significant differences between the two middle
schools
, even though the academic
subjects
are not famous in both
schools
.
According to
the data, among the academic subject which contains math, science, and literature, only literature subject is preferred in
school
B, recorded at 38%, approximately.
In contrast
, math and science
subjects
aren't accepted as favourite
subjects
in both
schools
which is lower than 20% . It is noteworthy that the students in
school
B tend to prefer indoor activities like drawings, but the students in
school
A tend to like outdoor activity
subjects
. The sports
subjects
are mainly preferred in
school
A
while
the other
subjects
are not recorded more than 20%.
This
subject is recorded at 72% in
school
A which is
school
B recorded at only 10%.
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