The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New' Zealand in 2002.

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The graph compares the data about the most played sports by

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and

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in New Zealand in 2002.

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, the percentage of

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outnumber the

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in all fields except swimming, netball and athletics.

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, the most common sport among

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was soccer,

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for

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it was netball. As can be seen from the chart, soccer was the males' favourite field, which almost 25% of them chose to play, but only 5% of females were interested in playing it. A similar difference can be seen in cricket, in which nearly

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15% of

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chose

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field versus almost 1% of

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. Men dominated women in fields including basketball, martial arts, tennis and other sports.

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, about 23% of

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chose swimming,

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almost 13% of

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decided to play it. Netball was the least favourite field among

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, which only 1% of them participated in,

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exactly 25% of

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loved

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game. Athletics

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the other two fields was

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strong point, in which almost 4% of them beat 3% of

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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

181 words

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Popularity
Demographic trends
Participation rates
National sport
Cultural impact
International identity
Generational shifts
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Sports infrastructure
Historical roots
Evolution over time
Government support
Community engagement
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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New' Zealand in 2002.

some people think that government should spend money on faster public transportation, while others think there are other more important priorities such as healthcare and the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or a negative development?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.