The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New' Zealand in 2002.

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played

in New' Zealand in 2002.
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The graph compares the data about the most played sports by
boys
and
girls
in New Zealand in 2002.
Overall
, the percentage of
boys
outnumber the
girls
in all fields except swimming, netball and athletics.
Additionally
, the most common sport among
boys
was soccer,
while
for
girls
it was netball. As can be seen from the chart, soccer was the males' favourite field, which almost 25% of them chose to play, but only 5% of females were interested in playing it. A similar difference can be seen in cricket, in which nearly
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15% of
boys
chose
this
field versus almost 1% of
girls
. Men dominated women in fields including basketball, martial arts, tennis and other sports.
On the other hand
, about 23% of
girls
chose swimming,
while
almost 13% of
boys
decided to play it. Netball was the least favourite field among
boys
, which only 1% of them participated in,
whereas
exactly 25% of
girls
loved
this
game. Athletics
as well as
the other two fields was
girl's
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strong point, in which almost 4% of them beat 3% of
boys
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Popularity
  • Demographic trends
  • Participation rates
  • National sport
  • Cultural impact
  • International identity
  • Generational shifts
  • Grassroots initiatives
  • Sports infrastructure
  • Historical roots
  • Evolution over time
  • Government support
  • Community engagement
  • Sports preferences
  • Future trends
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