In many countries, people are now living longer than ever Before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
For
this
current years
, some Fix the agreement mistake
year
population
in many states have a long life expectancy. Fix the agreement mistake
populations
This
lead
to different opinions about elderly Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
people
. Some people
believe that Correct article usage
the elder
elder
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elderly
population
creates issue
for Fix the agreement mistake
issues
governments
, while
other people
believe that elderly people
gain advantages for governments
. However
, these
both sides have Correct determiner usage
apply
a correct opinions
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a correct opinion
correct opinions
depends
on the Wrong verb form
depending
country
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country's
situations
.
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situation
Firstly
, elder people
in several developed countries
gives
their Change the verb form
give
governments
some advantages. For
example
lowering the Add a comma
example,
population
grow
, Replace the word
growth
due to
the lower birth population
numbers. In developed countries
that have big population
and limited resources, it will reduce the Fix the agreement mistake
populations
population
grow
that will Replace the word
growth
benefits
the Change the verb form
benefit
governments
. This
happens because the governments
no longer to
prepare some regulations and Fix the infinitive
apply
facilities
such
as place like housing, education, food and water to support new babies or child growing
. Wrong verb form
children
Obviously
it will ease the Add a comma
Obviously,
governments
cost on the things that mentioned before.
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government's
However
, many elder
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elderly
population
will make
Verb problem
be
burden
for the Correct article usage
a burden
goverments
. As we know, elder Correct your spelling
governments
government
people
no longer have good health conditions, consequently
this
lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
healthcare
expenses for governments
. For instance
, the
Correct article usage
apply
governments
should provide the best healthcare
system and regulation
for their Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
people
that
mostly elder Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
. In some countries
that already have good healthcare
facilities
, this
burdens
not really taking place. Fix the agreement mistake
burden
On the other hand
, some developing countries
that do not have good healthcare
facilities
should cost
more money Verb problem
spend
to
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on
this
. As we remember, in developing countries
, many aspect
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aspects
sould
be improved, not only for Correct your spelling
should
could
healthcare
facilities
, this
leads to so many burdens for the country.
Correct word choice
as this
To conclude
, elderly
Correct article usage
the elderly
population
gives advantages and disadvantages for governments
, especially for governments
regulation. Change the noun form
government
However
, it depends on the government and Correct article usage
the nation
nation
situation itself to support or not Change noun form
nation's
supporting
the elderly Change the form of the verb
support
population
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