A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. She/he has asked you for advices about living in your city. In your letter: Suggest an interesting part of the city to live in Describe the public transfortation in your city Say how your friend can meet new people in there
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. I am writing this
letter to inform you regarding some Correct your spelling
recommendations
recomendations
for you in living in my city.
Correct your spelling
recommendations
Firstly
, i
am going to tell you about the place Change the capitalization
I
for living
. There are several places that have magnificent Change preposition
to live
view
, Fix the agreement mistake
views
environment
, and Fix the agreement mistake
environments
building
. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
However
, i
would happily introduce you to my current Change the capitalization
I
residance
. It is MelbournCorrect your spelling
residence
Correct your spelling
Residence
Residance
which is located in highland
of Gajah Mada Street. The building looks very nice, particularly when the sun rises in the early morning. Correct article usage
the highland
Besides
, the environment is also
clean because the cleaning services are scheduled very well, so the environment is nicely clear by the thrases
. Correct your spelling
phrases
phrase
Also
, the view of the montain
and hill is really gorgeous. You can see two hills behind the Correct your spelling
mountain
mountains
residance
and a mountain next to the hills.
Correct your spelling
residence
Secondly
, the transportation in my residance
is mostly dominated by bus which is costly Correct your spelling
residence
affordable
for Correct word choice
and affordable
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who want to save their
money. So Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
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apply
people
often go to bus
station to wait for the bus that will take them to their workplace.
Another important thing about my Add an article
the bus
residance
is the way the Correct your spelling
residence
people
meet each other during the day where people
are often greeted by their neighbour. So, do not be surprised if the neighbour
are saying hi to you all the time you meet with them.
Fix the agreement mistake
neighbours
Finally
, Iam
sorry for the late reply Correct your spelling
I am
of
your letter. Thank you for your nice concern in advance. Hopefully, you are able to consider Change preposition
to
this
as a good choise
to stay in my Correct your spelling
choice
residance
. I cannot wait to see you.
Yours Sincerely
AnongCorrect your spelling
residence
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coherence cohesion
Try to divide your content into clearer paragraphs, each focusing on a single main idea. For example, one paragraph could solely describe the interesting part of the city, another for public transportation, and another for ways to meet people.
task achievement
You can improve the letter by carefully proofreading the text to catch typos and language errors (e.g., 'recomendations' should be 'recommendations', 'residance' should be 'residence', 'thrases' should be 'trash').
task achievement
Your tone is friendly and helpful, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
task achievement
You provided a comprehensive response to all parts of the task, giving suggestions on where to live, describing public transportation, and explaining how to meet new people.
coherence cohesion
Your opening and closing statements create a warm and engaging impression.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.