The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph reveals the frequency of museum visitation by adults, teenagers and special
exhibition
visitors from 1997 to 2012, a period of 15 years. Generally speaking, adults tend to be interested in cultural, historical or scientific heritage the most, and their number increased, just like the special
exhibition
sightseers.
However
, fewer youngsters are interested in exploring museums. As is shown by the bar chart, starting from 1997 with 300 thousand guests, the scale of adults reached the peak in 2007 with a figure
for
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400, 500. Despite the slight decline over the
last
5 years, the proportion of people aged over 18 was gradually going up culminating in the highest popularity of all three age groups. Special
exhibition
visitors became more inclined to take a look at the artistic galleries or past monuments as the upward tendency can be seen
In contrast
, people aged under 15 became less likely to go to the museums as their visitations dropped by 38 thousand over the 15 years timescale to finish at only 82, 3000. Irrespective of
this
fact, their
overall
score is still higher than that of special
exhibition
guests
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exhibition with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • consistent
  • variable
  • contribution
  • significant
  • correlation
  • decline
  • surge
  • gradual
  • notable
  • demographic
  • visitor influx
  • period under review
  • exhibit
  • domestic
  • international
  • educational institutions
  • trend analysis
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