Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates information about the rate of Australian
exports
to Japan, the US, China, and India between 1990 and 2012. Overall
, it is clear that
the amount of exportation to China increased sharply during the given time, while
the number
for India and the US were the lowest.
In 1990, Japan's Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
exports
to Australia were the highest at about 25%, but started to dropped
to less than 20% in the following 15 years, which saw an increase in 2007 at 20% to end up with about 18% in 2012. Change the verb
drop
In contrast
, China started with nearly 1% exports
,
but saw a significant rise to reach a peak of around 30% in 2012. Remove the comma
apply
However
, US exportation was about 11% and experienced a fluctuation in 1995 with less than 10% and in 2000 with more than 10%, and fell down to almost 5% in 2012.
On the other hand
, India's exports
to Australia were 1% in 1990 and stayed relatively stable until 2000 whereas
witnessed a dramatic increase to nearly 9% in 2009. After that
the numbers Add a comma
that,
were
dropped to roughly 5% in 2012.Unnecessary verb
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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