Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates information about the rate of Australian
exports
to Japan, the US, China, and India between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the amount of exportation to China increased sharply during the given time,
while
the
number
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for India and the US were the lowest. In 1990, Japan's
exports
to Australia were the highest at about 25%, but started to
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to less than 20% in the following 15 years, which saw an increase in 2007 at 20% to end up with about 18% in 2012.
In contrast
, China started with nearly 1%
exports
,
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but saw a significant rise to reach a peak of around 30% in 2012.
However
, US exportation was about 11% and experienced a fluctuation in 1995 with less than 10% and in 2000 with more than 10%, and fell down to almost 5% in 2012.
On the other hand
, India's
exports
to Australia were 1% in 1990 and stayed relatively stable until 2000
whereas
witnessed a dramatic increase to nearly 9% in 2009. After
that
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the numbers
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dropped to roughly 5% in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Export percentages
  • Significant trends
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Relative distribution
  • Global economic changes
  • Trade agreements
  • Shifts in demand
  • Market dynamics
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Bilateral trade relations
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