You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate the changes on an

island

after some constructions

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are

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built in terms of tourism. Apparently,

two-third

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two-thirds

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of the

island

has been constructed with abundant tourist-orientation facilities,

while

the beach and most of the

trees

were unaltered. Before becoming a leisure resort, the

island

was monotonous

that

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and

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it only had a few

trees

growing on both the east and the west.

Besides

, a beach was located on the west-end

island

. Afterwards, the

island

is mainly composed of accommodation,

acompanying

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accompanying

with a dining space and a reception

center

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centre

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. Regarding a pier

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the southern

island

, two

sailers

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sailors

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were increased on both sides of it.

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the east sector, the beach has become able to swim, and footpaths

allowed

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allow

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tourist

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tourists

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to access

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apply

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it. With six

accommadations

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accommodations

accommodation

built around a bunch of

trees

which settled at the exact same place,

vehicle

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a vehicle

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track was constructed in order to connect the rooms and the reception. There were nine

accommadations

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accommodations

accommodation

along with

footpaths

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the middle of the

island

, where were a empty land. There were no

signifant

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significant

changes on the eastern

island

, except two

trees

on the southern-east were moved to the edge

for sparing

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to spare

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some space for the tourists.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, trees with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

199 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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