The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph displays the number of young
people
who played seven different types of games between 1997 and 2017. Overall
, it is clear that
the highest number of adults
practised gentle walking throughout the given period
, while
the lowest were in basketball at the beginning of the period
and cricket at the end
of the period
.
In 1997, half of the young people
prefer gentle walking. Adults
who participated in jogging, aerobics, football, and hiking were at the same rate around 30%. However
, the third most sport to play was cricket at about 28%. By contrast
, less than 10% of youth took part in basketball games.
Gentle walking stayed the most favorable sport among adults
, in 2017, at around 55%. And about
50 per cent of young Correct word choice
About
people
played hiking and football in 2017, while
jogging and aerobic sports were around 35%. In contrast
to the number of adults
who played basketball at the beginning of the period
, almost 25% of young people
played it in 2017, which was 15% higher. The lowest rate in 2017 was for cricket less than 10%.Submitted by nidaa_hamed on
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