Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environmental. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The

world

is struggling to increase

economy

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.Most

of

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proponents believe that

increasing

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number

of

mutinational

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multinational

multinationals

industries

and

globalisation

is

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are

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harmful

for

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to

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the

environment

.I strongly advocate with

this

statement that internationalization

reversly

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reversibly

effects

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affects

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the

environment

and

putting

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puts

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heavy

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strain on developing

countries

.The following

paragraphes

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paragraphs

will discuss

this

notion.

Firstly

,

globalisation

is the way for

development

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the development

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and progress of a country.

Large

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number

of multinational

companies

are considered the rise the economy chart of a nation ,

while

it brings a

number

of problems that negatively

effect

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affect

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the

environment

of that country and in the long run

effect

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affect

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the whole

world

.These

industries

often exploit natural resources in developing

countries

without adequate consideration for environmental sustainability,leading to

deforestration

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deforestation

,water pollution and loss of biodiversity.

For example

,logging of forests for building

companies

and mixing of factories

wast

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waste

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in

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natural resources of water leads to water

as well as

air contamination.

Furthermore

,

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the expantion

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expantion

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expansion

of global trade means

increased

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an increased

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number

of transportation of goods across the

world

,significantly contributing to greenhouse gas emissions and global warming. As many developed

countries

have maintained

stricked

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strict

rules and regulations.So multinational

industries

move operations to

countries

with weaker environmental

regulation

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regulations

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,enabling them to pollute

exploit

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and exploit

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resources without facing significant legal consequences.

For example

,in the

last

few

decads

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decades

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,China progressed vastly because China gives relaxation to all these

companies

.The reason behind

this

is the economic pressure so many developing nations prioritize economic growth over environmental protection

due to

pressure to attract foreign investment ,leading to lax enforcement of environmental standards.

On the other hand

,some

industries

follow the rules to protect the

environment

by using green technologies and sustainable practices,

thus

showcasing that

globalisation

can drive

the

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environmental improvement.

To conclude

,

although

economic pressure is a great cause for

globalisation

,multinational

companies

negatively

effecting

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affect

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the

environment

.

Everycountry

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Every country

need

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needs

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to

develope

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develop

rules to prohibit

this

damage and

industries

should

also

take part

for

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in

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world

protection.