Children find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. what are the reasons?how can we solve this problem?

Nowadays, there is an

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phenomenon where students think that they are hard to focus on their courses at

school

. In

this

essay, I will argue several reasons to explain why

this

problem occurs and recommend solutions. The first one that comes to my mind is that the knowledge taught is

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with

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online.

This

is mainly because

children

may have absorbed

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before

classes

.

For example

, if there is a class for

children

regarding

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flowers, they will search images online about plants so that they will acknowledge it already.

As a result

, they ignore lessons at

school

.

Additionally

, the outdated teaching facilities in classrooms make courses more boring.

For instance

, printed materials

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have limited

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,

while

students are used to well-illustrated

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.

Furthermore

, new entertainment methods distract them.

This

is mainly because they

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lack

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self-decipline

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self-discipline

, resulting in

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addicted to entertaining materials.

For example

,

children

’s concentration may be deprived

due to

video games and short films As for what we could do to deal with

this

issue,

firstly

, teachers should improve their method of

classes

, with more sophisticated information. If they could make some films to appeal to

children

with

humor

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,

classes

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be interesting enough to lure students.

In addition

, parents should take pupils’ smart devices

such

as

smart phones

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away from them before they

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them to

school

. In conclusion,

children

’s preference

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new knowledge is the main cause of

this

problem. Not only does the lack of updated teaching facilities cause

this

problem, but

also

distraction from new entertainment does. In my opinion, teachers and parents should take the

responsibilities

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to

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their

children

from

distracted

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from

classes

at

school

.