many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environmental .to what extand do you agree or disagree?

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is struggling to increase the economy.Most proponents believe that the increasing

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of multinational

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and

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are harmful to the environment.I strongly advocate

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statement that internationalization reversibly affects the climate and puts a heavy strain on developing

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notion.

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is the way for the development and progress of a country.A large

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of multinational

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are considered the rise the economy chart of a nation ,

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it brings a

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of problems that negatively affect the surroundings of that country and in the long

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affect the whole

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.These

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often exploit natural resources in developing

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without adequate consideration for environmental sustainability,leading to deforestation,water pollution and loss of biodiversity.

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,logging of forests for building companies and mixing of factories waste natural resources of water

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to water

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air contamination.

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of global trade means an increased

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of transportation of goods across the

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,significantly contributing to greenhouse gas emissions and global warming.

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developed

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have maintained strict rules and regulations.So multinational

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move operations to

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with weaker environmental regulations,enabling them to pollute and exploit resources without facing significant legal consequences.

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few decades,China progressed vastly because China

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relaxation to all these companies.The reason behind

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is the economic pressure so many developing nations prioritize economic growth over environmental protection

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pressure to attract foreign investment ,leading to lax enforcement of environmental standards.

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follow the rules to protect the environment by using green technologies and sustainable practices,

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showcasing that

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can drive environmental improvement.

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economic pressure is a great cause for

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,multinational companies negatively affect the environment.Every country needs to develop rules to prohibit

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damage and

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should

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take part in

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protection.