Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

In today's contemporary world and advancement in technology, there has been
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surge in the utilization of
robots
, some
people
claim that the use of
robots
has
benefits
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other
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others
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argue that the
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outweigh the
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essay will outline the two views and give my perspective. one fundamental advantage of
robots
is the ease at which difficult
tasks
are accomplished,
robots
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was considered difficult
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for instance
with the advancement of technology
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tend
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tend
to utilise washing machines,
robots
that clean the house and many more, all these
benefits
have made life easy and
tasks
are performed within a short duration as opposed to the traditional way of carrying out these duties which took a significant amount of time, leaving the individual tired as it was
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robots
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provided
people
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a working mother
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take care
of the children and perform house chores.
However
,
robots
have proved to be essential in
this
case,leading to low stress levels, and
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mental health.
On the other hand
,
robots
tend to encourage a sedentary lifestyle,
people
abuse these
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and leave
tasks
that they could perform easily to the robot. A sedentary lifestyle has been
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to be associated with healthy conditions
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repercussion
repercussions
associated with
robots
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by solely dependence on the
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the robot is
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hold valid points, and the debate is complex.
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essential
for
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individuals
to strike a balance between the
benefits
and the dangers. Ultimately, the decision to incorporate
robots
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surrounding it.
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coherence cohesion
Improve paragraph structure by ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. For example, separate advantages and disadvantages of robots into distinct paragraphs without mixing other points.
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Enhance task response by adding more specific and varied examples to support your points. This will make your arguments more convincing and relatable.
task achievement
The essay addresses the task by discussing both benefits and dangers of using robots, and offers a clear perspective.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and provide a relevant context for the discussion, effectively framing the essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • monotonous tasks
  • intellectually stimulating
  • hazardous environments
  • job displacement
  • economic output
  • lower-skilled workers
  • dependency
  • critical skills
  • ethical concerns
  • security concerns
  • unlawful purposes
  • dilemmas
  • autonomous vehicles
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