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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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 all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Some people say that
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 all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Some people say that
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 all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. I have come across your job posting for
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 administrator. I am interested in applying for the position. Please find the attached resume. It provides up-to-date information on my background and qualifications.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • practical skills
  • theoretical knowledge
  • balanced approach
  • rote learning
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • student satisfaction
  • educational outcomes
  • employer expectations
  • lifelong learning
  • adaptability
  • competitive edge
  • job-ready
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