The chart below shows what Anthropology graduated from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course . The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years .
The pie chart illustrates the number of Anthropology students who worked after graduating from one university.
Whereas the
table provides information about the comparison of salaries of the anthropologists after five years of working.
Correct word choice
The
Overall
, it can be seen apparently that most of the graduated students worked in a full-time job, meanwhile, fewer students did both path-time
jobs and studied postgrad courses. Correct your spelling
full-time
Furthermore
, anthropologists who are employed in the government sector earn the highest salaries after working for five years.
Focusing broader on the pie graph, full-time work accounted for 52% of all careers, followed by part-time jobs and unemployment, which constituted 15% and 12%, respectively. Afterwards, there was a similar number in both full-time postgrad study and undefined group, contributing 8%. Additionally
, the lowest percentage was a group of people who studied postgrad and also
did part-time, which occupied only 5%.
Tuning to the table, employees in freelance consultants are responsible for 40% on average above $100000 of salary and had 5%-40% in $25,555-$99,999 incomes. Then
, the government sector offered the highest income for workers, being 50%, meanwhile, there is vary
in range from 5% to 30% in the other figures of revenues. Correct article usage
a vary
In addition
, 35% of workers in a private company earned around $50,000-$74,999, in the meantime, there is 10% - 30% in the rest of the salary groups.Submitted by saiparnwc on
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