You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart delineates the proportion of the population aged 65 years and over from 1940 to 2040 in three countries: the USA, Sweden, and
Japan
.
Overall
, Japan
shows significant variations, ranging from 5 per cent
to 27 per cent
. In contrast
, Sweden and the USA exhibit somewhat similar trends.
To begin
with, the USA had a proportion of 9 per cent
in 1940, which rose to 10 per cent
the following year and increased by 5 per cent
in the next year. It then
experienced a slight drop to 13 per cent
and remained steady until 2020 before rising to 23 per cent
by 2040.
In Japan
, the proportion started at 5 per cent
, decreased to 3 per cent
by 1960, and remained relatively stable until 2000. It then
increased to 8 per cent
in 2020 and surged to 27 per cent
by 2040.Meanwhile, Sweden began with 7 per cent
of its population aged 65 and over in 1940. This
rose to 8 per cent
in 1960, levelled up to 13 per cent
the following year, experienced a decline, then
rose to 20 per cent
in 2010, and finally
reached 25 per cent
by 2040. In conclusion, the data show that all three countries are experiencing an ageing population, with Japan
showing the most dramatic increase by 2040.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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