The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

The given infographic illustrates the 5 stages of how gas drinks

is

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made. From an observational perspective, the process commences with raw

water

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moving

though

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through

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some scientific steps to make

fizzy

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a fizzy

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beverage which ready for

distributing

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distribution

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. The first step

commerces

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with

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raw

water

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is cleaned by filtered and softened in some specific pieces of machinery

then

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it is stored in a pump.

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cleaned

water

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is gone

though

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through

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the electric heaters which

connected

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with

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to

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cooling

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a cooling

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pipe to separate carbon dioxide from

water

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.

Following

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this

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step, carbon dioxide is transformed into carbonated

water

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and mixed in a mixing tank.

Subsequently

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, after mixing, the mixture is distinguished

to

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three types which are colouring, syrup and

flavor

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flavour

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. Preparing gas drinks for production is the focus of the latter steps in the sequence. Once, the fizzy beverage has been filtered again in a filter and filled in bottles

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cans. The whole process terminates when the bottles and cans are

packages

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packaged

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in

container

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containers

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ready to be sold to the supermarket.