You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between

1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the fraction of people aged higher or equal to 65 years old in three countries comprising the USA,
Sweden
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and Japan in six years with 20-year intervals from 1940 to a projection
2040
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of 2040
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the population in America and
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are almost the same throughout the record
while
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Japan staying in the final place will surpass those two countries in the near future.
To begin
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with, the United States of America started at a nominal 9% and went up to 15% in 1980. A slight decrease was seen after 1980 before hovering at 14% until 2020 and will surge to nearly a massive 23% in 2040.
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, the proportion of elderly people in
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was a meagre 7% and its trend continuously soared;
besides
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, will arrive and end the period at an enormous 25% in 2040. What is interesting to note is the percentage of
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between the first year and the
last
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year of
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is different by just under 5 times.
Additionally
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, the percentage of Japanese senior citizens was at a minuscule 5% in 1940 and dropped to 3% in 1960;
consequently
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, levelled off for 30 years and it was predicted to rocket up, reaching its peak at a gigantic 27% in the
last
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year. What is surprising to see is Japan in 1940 less than 2040 by more than 5 times.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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