You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the fraction of people aged higher or equal to 65 years old in three countries comprising the USA,
Sweden
and Japan in six years with 20-year intervals from 1940 to a projection Use synonyms
2040
.
Change preposition
of 2040
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the population in America and Linking Words
Sweden
are almost the same throughout the record Use synonyms
while
Japan staying in the final place will surpass those two countries in the near future.
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To begin
with, the United States of America started at a nominal 9% and went up to 15% in 1980. A slight decrease was seen after 1980 before hovering at 14% until 2020 and will surge to nearly a massive 23% in 2040. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the proportion of elderly people in Linking Words
Sweden
was a meagre 7% and its trend continuously soared; Use synonyms
besides
, will arrive and end the period at an enormous 25% in 2040. What is interesting to note is the percentage of Linking Words
Sweden
between the first year and the Use synonyms
last
year of Linking Words
statistic
is different by just under 5 times.
Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
Additionally
, the percentage of Japanese senior citizens was at a minuscule 5% in 1940 and dropped to 3% in 1960; Linking Words
consequently
, levelled off for 30 years and it was predicted to rocket up, reaching its peak at a gigantic 27% in the Linking Words
last
year. What is surprising to see is Japan in 1940 less than 2040 by more than 5 times.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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