The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The
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pie charts illustrate changes in the amount of money spent on a yearly basis in a UK school in three different years.
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Overall
, teachers’ salaries accounted for the largest proportion, while
for insurance, this
figure constituted the smallest share.
In 1981, the budget spent on teachers’ salaries was 40%, after which this
figure slightly rose to 50% in the following ten years before dropping to 45% in 2001. In a similar fashion, people spent 2% on insurance in 1981, at which point expenditure for this
category increased fourfold in 2001, at 8%
Conversely
, spending on other workers’ salaries witnessed a downward trend, from 28% to 15% during the given period. Turning to the remaining sectors, after resources climbed from 15% to 20%, it fell to only 9%. In contrast
, money used for furniture and equipment significantly dropped from 15% to 5%, followed by a sharp rise to 23% in 2001.Submitted by phamduchien711 on
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