Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Say how important New year is to people in your country •describe how New year is celebrated in your country •explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
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Dear Elsa
I hope
this
letter will help your college project and i
Change the capitalization
I
also
should really say that I'm glad to beg me
for your project
Well, the New Correct pronoun usage
you
Year
is significant for people in my country because relatives can get together again around the table and spend their times
happily with each other. People always make wishes at that time and believe that Fix the agreement mistake
time
New
Correct article usage
the New
year
is coming with new achievements, by the Capitalize word
Year
way
they Add the comma(s)
way,
do planning
new things for their Wrong verb form
plan
works
that they should be done in the new Fix the agreement mistake
work
year
. The first thing i
should maintain is that New Change the capitalization
I
Year
offers a chance to set new goals, make resalutions
and envision a better future
In my Correct your spelling
resolutions
countries
, New Fix the agreement mistake
country
year's
Capitalize word
Year's
eve
is celebrated with dancing, eating, drinking, and watching or lighting fireworks. Every New Capitalize word
Eve
year's
Eve my mom and Capitalize word
Year's
i
cook unusual foods ,before that we learn about how to cook these. Change the capitalization
I
Then
everyone try
new foods that we make.we decorate our house with Change the verb form
tries
type
of tournaments before few a days. Sometimes we visit our loved ones who Fix the agreement mistake
types
lives
far away. People usually let off Change the verb form
live
rocket
, children circle around the fir tree. I am aware of New Fix the agreement mistake
rockets
year'
history that's why Capitalize word
Year'
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
muslims
in my country don't celebrate the New Change the capitalization
Muslims
Year
i
think.
I would say that Change the capitalization
I
New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
holiday is one of my favourites. The best thing i
like Change the capitalization
I
that
everyone Add a missing verb
is that
get
together and Change the verb form
gets
forget
grief and sorrow at that moment.
And Correct subject-verb agreement
forgets
this
is how we celebrate in
New Change preposition
apply
Year
's Eve
If you need a
help you can ask me and whatever Remove the article
apply
happens
I'll help you
Yours faithfully,
LilyAdd a comma
happens,
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coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
In a formal letter, it's better to avoid using contractions like 'i'm' and ensure proper capitalization such as 'I'.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly and engaging tone, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
task achievement
The content provides a complete response to the prompt, covering all required points.
coherence and cohesion
The letter starts with a warm greeting and ends with a polite closing, maintaining a good structure.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,