Diagram showing the structure and use of a simple solar panel.

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The given process provides information on how the structure
work
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works
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and
use
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the use
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of a simple solar
panel
. What
was
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is
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notable about the present process which has 2 usages and
structure
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structures
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after
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apply
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all
Correct determiner usage
apply
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. Starting with the structure of the
box
with a transparent top. Following, the first way
using
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is the solar
panel
heat
air
. And the second approach is the solar
panel
to
heat
water
. Beginning with the first usage of the solar
panel
, it places a transparent top which as soon as is built above the
box
to turn
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turns
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into a complete solar
panel
. Continuing with, one obvious
ways
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way
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is the way of
heat
air
. At
first,
the cool
air
is flown into the inlet of the solar
panel
which
locates
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is located
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on the left corner of the
box
. After
that
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that,
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the inlet transports the cool
air
into the
box
with
transparent
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a transparent
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top above.
Finally
, the
air
is come
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comes
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outside by outlet. Continuing with another usage of the solar
panel
,
the
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is the
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way it is used to
heat
water
. The
different
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difference
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between the solar
panel
to
heat
air
and
heat
water
is that it has a
water
pipe to transport
water
instead
of space
such
as
solar
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a solar
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panel
to
heat
air
. The steps of operating
is
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are
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the same
with
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as
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the
heat
air
one but the sun
is increase
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increases
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the temperature to cause a high
heat
which
made
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makes
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water
is become
Verb problem
apply
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vaporize.
Finally
, it is come outside by the outlet which is used to transport
water
out.

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coherence cohesion
Work on presenting the information in a clearer and more structured manner. Ensure that each part of the process is described in detail, step-by-step, without assuming the reader has prior knowledge of the diagram.
task achievement
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and vary your sentence structures. Complex sentences are good, but clarity should always be the priority.
coherence cohesion
Avoid repetition and ensure that each sentence contributes new information. This will help make your essay more engaging and informative.
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The essay does attempt to cover all the key stages of the process described in the diagram.
task achievement
The essay includes descriptions of the different uses of the solar panel, which shows an understanding of the topic.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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