The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
The given three pie charts illustrate differences in yearly
spendin
by local officials in Someland between 1980, 1990 and 2000. The biggest Correct your spelling
spending
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one
is higher education and it stayed biggest
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the biggest
one
. Transportation changed too much.
Higher education was 35 percent
and it was biggest
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the biggest
one
in 1980. After decade
, it Add an article
a decade
incerased
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increased
one
in ten Change preposition
by one
percent
and it decreased to 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2000. Sector k-12 education had been 25 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
when started. It fell a very small number Change the spelling
per cent
than
it decreased again and it was 18 Correct your spelling
then
percent
in 2000. Transportation was 16 percent
when it started and that had a Change the spelling
per cent
dramatically
decrease in 1990. But it climbed with Change the adverb
dramatic
the
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a
sharply
increase from 6 Change the adverb
sharp
percent
to 22 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
last
decade. Health and human resources Correct article usage
the last
was
14 Change the verb form
were
percent
when it started Change the spelling
per cent
then
, it grew 6 percent
in 1990 but it Change the spelling
per cent
dopped
back to Correct your spelling
dropped
one
in ten percent
. Environmental services had been 4 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
when it started in 1980. After that, it grew but it Change the spelling
per cent
still
a very small number Add a missing verb
was still
in
the chart. It rose again and it reached Change preposition
on
to
9 Change preposition
apply
percent
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finally
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sectors the smallest Change preposition
in other
one
was 6 percent
in 1980 and it Change the spelling
per cent
decresed
to 4 Correct your spelling
decreased
percent
. When it came to 2000, it was 1 Change the spelling
per cent
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