The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two years. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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electricity

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by fuel source in France in

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in 1990 Coal and Natural

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1990. Coal Natural

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of electricity

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the data 2010. Nuclear

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, figure, gas, power, percent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

percentage
electricity production
fuel source
nuclear power
renewable energy
fossil fuels
coal
natural gas
oil
hydroelectric power
solar energy
wind energy
biomass
comparison
increase
decrease
significant change
trend
distribution
energy mix

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The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two years. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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