The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billioin) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three catagories, from 1995-2002. Summarises the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billioin) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three catagories, from 1995-2002.

Summarises the information by selection and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar diagram illustrates the number of three different kinds of phone calls in Great Britain between 1995 and 2022. The unit on the Y-axis is shown in billion minutes.
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it is clear that
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the local fixed line was used more than the national
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besides
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, mobiles are not interesting to British citizens.
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with, looking at the fixed line, the total of local started at well over 70 and continuously inclined to a gigantic 90 in 1999. A dramatic drop was seen from 1999 to 2002 and ended at almost the same number as in the first year.
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, National and international lines in 1995 were a nominal 37 and gradually escalated to 2002 with approximately 60. What is interesting to note is that both two fixed lines were different by
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half in the first year.
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, the minutes of mobile began at a minuscule 4 in 1995 and it slightly went up to a meagre 14 in 1999. It surged and arrived at its highest point which was roughly a massive 45 in 2002.
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but not least, What is surprising to see is that the year 2002 was well over 10 times more than 1995.
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