The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020 with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the graph provided reveals the ratio of
population
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the population
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of the Philippines,
Malaysia
,
Thailand
and Indonesia living in cities during a period of 50 years from 1970 and 2020 with extra predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that by far the highest rate of
population
belongs to
Malaysia
.
In contrast
, the lowest proportion of
population
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the population
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is related to
Thailand
.
According to
what is shown, the portion of
population
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the population
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of
Thailand
and Indonesia is lower than 30% ,
while
that of the Philippines and
Malaysia
is more than 30% up to 2000.
In addition
, the trends of Indonesia and
Malaysia
have wild fluctuations and those of both countries are upward.
Furthermore
, the trends of the proportion of the Philippines and
Thailand
have slight fluctuations and those of both countries are upward.
Thus
, it is reasonable to summarize that the ratio of the total
population
of four different Asian countries will increase by more than 40% up by 2040.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, thailand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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