In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is a lot of hype regarding autonomous driving. It is

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that by 2050, most of the

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will be

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seem to be

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various factors. Even though

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vehicles

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may be

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beneficial

for transportation companies

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I think there are certain risks associated with

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to be

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, autonomous

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can help reduce

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expense

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of logistics companies. Organizations may not

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to hire and train drivers to drive those particular equipment

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it can be

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convenient

for families to travel long distances.

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, one may travel from Ottawa to Calgary without worrying about the dedication or situational awareness

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required

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driving an ordinary car.

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the manufacturers of these

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vehicles

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claims

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that these means of

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transport

are safe to drive or operate regardless of the terrain or environment.

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there is a chance that the software of

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may develop a temporary glitch which can cause the system to fail or the

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to malfunction entirely. There was a report published by Reuters, that stated autonomous

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are equipped with multiple sensors which

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to be monitored to ensure driving or operations. A Tesla, Model S, was involved in an accident

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year

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to identify the dividing lane. The car went into the wrong lane in order to make a left turn and the

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eventually got hit by the oncoming car.

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but not

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least, the purchase price of these autonomous

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are

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not generous and is far away from

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public's purchasing power.

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driverless

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vehicle

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is a great

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achievement

in terms of

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development

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these

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have their own systematic

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challenges

, higher price

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

313 words

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