In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is a lot of hype regarding autonomous driving. It is

estimted

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estimated

that by 2050, most of the

vehicles

will be

driverless

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this

target

does'nt

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doesn't

does not

seem to be

acheivable

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achievable

due to

various factors. Even though

driverless

vehicles

may be

benificial

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beneficial

for transportation companies

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I think there are certain risks associated with

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which

needs

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to be

adressed

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addressed

Firstly

, autonomous

vehicles

can help reduce

operational

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the operational

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expense

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expenses

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of logistics companies. Organizations may not

require

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to hire and train drivers to drive those particular equipment

type

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it can be

convinient

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convenient

for families to travel long distances.

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, one may travel from Ottawa to Calgary without worrying about the dedication or situational awareness

that is

required

while

driving an ordinary car.

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the manufacturers of these

driverless

vehicles

claims

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that these means of

tranpsort

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transport

are safe to drive or operate regardless of the terrain or environment.

On the other

hand

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there is a chance that the software of

these

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this vehicle

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vehicle

may develop a temporary glitch which can cause the system to fail or the

vehicle

to malfunction entirely. There was a report published by Reuters, that stated autonomous

vehicles

are equipped with multiple sensors which

needs

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to be monitored to ensure driving or operations. A Tesla, Model S, was involved in an accident

last

year

due to

failure

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the failure

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sensor

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the sensor

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to identify the dividing lane. The car went into the wrong lane in order to make a left turn and the

vehicle

eventually got hit by the oncoming car.

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but not

the

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least, the purchase price of these autonomous

vehicles

are

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not generous and is far away from

general

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public's purchasing power.

To conclude

driverless

vehicle

is a great

acheivement

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achievement

in terms of

scintific

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scientific

development

however

these

vehicles

have their own systematic

challeneges

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challenges

, higher price

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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