People were happier in previous generations compared to now. To what extent do you agree? disagree
The older
era
is believed to be more relaxed than the recent era
. First,
the older era
environment is not as stable as it is now. Secondly
, the source of entertainment
in that era
is very limited. For those reasons, I strongly disagree with saying the older time is happier than the newer one.
The early
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early-year
year
environment, especially after the World War
in 1945 or the First World War
in 1930, is very unstable. This
is caused by the raging battle that destroyed most population infrastructures. Henceforth, societies were stressed as they were still in recovery, particularly with their economies. Additionally
, nations that were greatly affected by the war
are in crisis. Thereupon
, the people
in those nations suffer a heavy loss not only with their economy but also
with their families as some of them are the victims of war
. It must be remembered that in 1946, a year
after the battle ended, countries on all continents suffered an event called the great depression. A point overlooked in that event is the economy as it collapses is deprivation within societies, putting them in a state of survival. With this
in mind, it makes me wonder how stressful it is to live in such
a generation.
The limited variations of entertainment
in that age make that even worse. However
, the younger generations argue that entertainment
at that age could make people
happier. Although
this
may be true, some entertainment
is only reached by upper-class societies because of their pricey tags. Therefore
, the lower one has a limited source of refreshments. The first thing to remember is leisure media was not as fancy as today. To put it, nowadays people
have access to a plethora of entertainment
options with their gadgets, whereas
in the early days, those had not been founded yet. The most compelling evidence to prove this
is from the historical data from 1945 that shows 8 of 10 people
in that year
suffered depression. Thus
, most people
in that year
have plenty of huge problems to handle, making them not as happy as people
in recent years.
In conclusion, Most people
in the early days do not enjoy their life due to
the unstable condition of their environment, not to mention
the limited source of leisure media to be chosen to overcome the stress from living in such
conditions. Because of the corresponding problem, I strongly do not agree with the statement saying people
in recent years are more stressed than in the early years.Submitted by arsyiiimuhammad061 on
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