The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the difference in male and female earnings in five countries in four years with ten-year intervals between 1978 and 2008.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the change in incomes in Japan is higher than compared to others;
however
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,
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's and France's wages seem likely to be equal
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both genders.
To begin
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with, the fraction of Japan started at a gigantic 48% and gradually dropped to approximately an enormous 40% in 2008.
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, both the UK and the US had a downward trend and they began at nearly a massive 34% and 29% in the first year of the record before continuously diving and arriving at roughly 27% and 26% respectively, What is interesting to note is that the lowest point of Great Britain and America were less than
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around 1.5 times.
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, the percentage of France's and
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's inequality was well under 20% and minimally went down to about a meagre 18% in 1998. A
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widening of
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gap was seen after 1998 when
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shot up to 23% whilst France still decreased to reach its minimum at a minuscule 17%. What is surprising to see is that both countries almost had the same number in the year 1998.
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