The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below illustrates the problem of environmental
incresed
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increase
by
a goods
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a good
goods
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over its life cycle.
Overall
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, it can be seen those of seven
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process
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processes
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. Starting from the consumption of
meterials
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materials
and energy resources.
Then
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The
last
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stages
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stage
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the
product
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will be
recyled
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recycled
by
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apply
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them. Regarding the picture,
at
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apply
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the first step of the
process
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,
it
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apply
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is planning and
design
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designing
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product
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a product
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the
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apply
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they
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that
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can
sended
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be sent
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by container car.
Then
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Consumption of
meterials
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materials
and energy resources that of
product
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to
sent
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send
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the factory. And
then
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,
production
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the production
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process
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it
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apply
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can
made
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make
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a
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apply
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goods in
home
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the home
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industry to prepare
the
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a
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good quality
of
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apply
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product
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. After that,
this
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process
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packaging
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of packaging
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and distribution to ensure the good
fulffil standars
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full standards
before
send
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sending
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to
costumers
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customers
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. The five stages
sales
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of sales
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can be selling good for
costumers
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customers
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if
they
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the
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product
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is good to use. Followed by next
proscess
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process
the
product
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is been used by
costumers
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customers
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, so they can
disposal
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disposed
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at
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of at
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the place landfill.
The
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In the
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final
stages
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stage
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they must
ben
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be
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recycling the goods after they
used
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use
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it
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them
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, product with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lifecycle
  • Environmental impact
  • Raw materials
  • Resource depletion
  • Pollution
  • Carbon emissions
  • Transportation
  • Energy consumption
  • Waste generation
  • Sustainable sourcing
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Recycling
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