The diagram below shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below illustrates the problem of environmental
incresed
by Correct your spelling
increase
a goods
over its life cycle.
Correct the article-noun agreement
a good
goods
Overall
, it can be seen those of seven Linking Words
Use synonyms
process
. Starting from the consumption of Change to a plural noun
processes
meterials
and energy resources. Correct your spelling
materials
Then
The Linking Words
last
Linking Words
stages
the Fix the agreement mistake
stage
product
will be Use synonyms
recyled
Correct your spelling
recycled
by
them.
Regarding the picture, Change preposition
apply
at
the first step of the Change preposition
apply
process
, Use synonyms
it
is planning and Correct pronoun usage
apply
design
Wrong verb form
designing
Use synonyms
product
Correct article usage
a product
the
Remove the article
apply
they
can Correct pronoun usage
that
sended
by container car. Wrong verb form
be sent
Then
Consumption of Linking Words
meterials
and energy resources that of Correct your spelling
materials
product
to Use synonyms
sent
the factory. And Change the form of the verb
send
then
, Linking Words
production
Correct article usage
the production
process
Use synonyms
it
can Correct pronoun usage
apply
made
Wrong verb form
make
a
goods in Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
home
industry to prepare Correct article usage
the home
the
good quality Correct article usage
a
of
Change preposition
apply
product
. After that, Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
process
Use synonyms
packaging
and distribution to ensure the good Change preposition
of packaging
fulffil standars
before Correct your spelling
full standards
send
to Change the verb form
sending
costumers
.
The five stages Correct your spelling
customers
sales
can be selling good for Change preposition
of sales
costumers
if Correct your spelling
customers
they
Correct your spelling
the
product
is good to use. Followed by next Use synonyms
proscess
the Correct your spelling
process
product
is been used by Use synonyms
costumers
, so they can Correct your spelling
customers
disposal
Replace the word
disposed
at
the place landfill. Change preposition
of at
The
final Change preposition
In the
stages
they must Fix the agreement mistake
stage
ben
recycling the goods after they Correct your spelling
be
used
Wrong verb form
use
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, product with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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