The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how a desert
island
changed into an entertainment resort .
Overall
, it can be seen the biggest changes have occurred in the recreational and residential amenities ,while
agricultural
zone has been Correct article usage
the agricultural
knock
down over the given period .
The first map Change the verb form
knocking
knocked
show
an empty Change the verb form
shows
island
with no signs of life .The island
was surrounded by sea and there is
a beach on the western part of the Wrong verb form
was
island
and there was
some alone trees and palms.
Change the verb form
were
However
after some time ,the island
was reconstructed and residential buildings, restaurants and swimming areas have been
built. Wrong verb form
were
In
addition
roads were paved for people and vehicles.Add a comma
addition,
Also
a pier was erected on the south end of the Add a comma
Also,
island
. The generally uninhabited island
has been modernized into a luxury resort with all the amenities for tourists and for that ,no plants or trees were cut.Submitted by rghdbyby47 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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