The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate how a desert

island

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changed into an entertainment resort .

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, it can be seen the biggest changes have occurred in the recreational and residential amenities ,

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agricultural

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the agricultural

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zone has been

knock

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knocking

knocked

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down over the given period . The first map

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an empty

island

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with no signs of life .The

island

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was surrounded by sea and there

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a beach on the western part of the

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and there

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some alone trees and palms.

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after some time ,the

island

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was reconstructed and residential buildings, restaurants and swimming areas

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were

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built.

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addition

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addition,

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roads were paved for people and vehicles.

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a pier was erected on the south end of the

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. The generally uninhabited

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has been modernized into a luxury resort with all the amenities for tourists and for that ,no plants or trees were cut.