You are planning to take a vacation. Writing a letter to a friend. In your letter: describe the vacation spot you have chosen explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation

Dear Emil, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health.
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am writing to inform you that
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have
planed
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planned
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go
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to go
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on holiday with our family for two
month
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. as you know
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have never been
go
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to Kerandangan Beach.
Morever
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Moreover
,
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want to invite you
join
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with
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us and
guid
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guide
us .
i
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would like
prefare
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to
go on holiday like
ambiance
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the ambiance
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blue marine and
large
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a large
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prety
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pretty
view. because
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hear
the
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that
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Kerandangan Beach have
environment
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a environment
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clear and numerous
spot
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spots
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like
swiming
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swimming
and
fisihing
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fishing
finishing
this
is awesome
attractive
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and attractive
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for me. As
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said above
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would do any
activite overthere
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activity over there
with my
childern
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children
like spend time
make
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making
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a joke and
burn
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burning
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fish.
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have
plan
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a plan
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put
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in three days.
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hope
this
good story. on
this
occasion
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would to engage you if you have free time. as
i
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know you have been living near Kerandangan Beach. I believe you must know a lot of
location
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locations
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for instance
: for
accomodation
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accommodation
. thank you so much i hope
this
will be
magnificent
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a magnificent
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vacation.
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looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regard, Habib
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task achievement
Pay closer attention to spelling and grammar to improve clarity. Words like 'planned', 'prefer', 'activities', and 'children' were misspelled.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea. For instance, separating the invitation from the description will improve readability.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and inviting tone, which is very suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Greetings and closing are well done, enhancing the overall structure of the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking scenery
  • cultural landmarks
  • itinerary
  • accommodations
  • excursions
  • gastronomic delights
  • leisure activities
  • unwind and relax
  • off the beaten track
  • once-in-a-lifetime experience
  • picturesque
  • explore
  • local cuisine
  • adventure
  • bonding
  • create memories
  • companionship
  • escapade
  • serenity
  • revitalize
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