You are planning to take a vacation. Writing a letter to a friend. In your letter: describe the vacation spot you have chosen explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation
Dear Emil,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. i
am writing to inform you that Change the capitalization
I
i
have Change the capitalization
I
planed
Correct your spelling
planned
go
on holiday with our family for two Fix the infinitive
to go
month
. as you know Change to a plural noun
months
i
have never been Change the capitalization
I
go
to Kerandangan Beach. Verb problem
apply
Morever
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
i
want to invite you Change the capitalization
I
join
Add the particle
to join
with
us and Change preposition
apply
guid
us .
Correct your spelling
guide
i
would like Change the capitalization
I
prefare
go on holiday like Correct your spelling
to
ambiance
blue marine and Correct article usage
the ambiance
large
Correct article usage
a large
prety
view. because Correct your spelling
pretty
i
hear Change the capitalization
I
the
Kerandangan Beach have Correct determiner usage
that
environment
clear and numerous Correct article usage
a environment
spot
like Fix the agreement mistake
spots
swiming
and Correct your spelling
swimming
fisihing
Correct your spelling
fishing
finishing
this
is awesome attractive
for me.
As Correct word choice
and attractive
i
said above Change the capitalization
I
i
would do any Change the capitalization
I
activite overthere
with my Correct your spelling
activity over there
childern
like spend time Correct your spelling
children
make
a joke and Wrong verb form
making
burn
fish. Wrong verb form
burning
i
have Change the capitalization
I
plan
Correct article usage
a plan
put
in three days. Fix the infinitive
to put
i
hope Change the capitalization
I
this
good story.
on this
occasion
Add a comma
occasion,
i
would to engage you if you have free time. as Change the capitalization
I
i
know you have been living near Kerandangan Beach. I believe you must know a lot of Change the capitalization
I
location
Fix the agreement mistake
locations
for instance
: for accomodation
.
thank you so much i hope Correct your spelling
accommodation
this
will be magnificent
vacation. Add an article
a magnificent
i
looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regard,
HabibChange the capitalization
I
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task achievement
Pay closer attention to spelling and grammar to improve clarity. Words like 'planned', 'prefer', 'activities', and 'children' were misspelled.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea. For instance, separating the invitation from the description will improve readability.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and inviting tone, which is very suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Greetings and closing are well done, enhancing the overall structure of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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