The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of individuals in different age groups attending one Australian cinema in eleven
years
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with two-year intervals between 1990 and 2010.
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,
it is clear that
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people among 14-24
years
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old fond of watching movies in a cinema
while
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the elderly people are not interested in
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place.
To begin
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with, The youngest group began at just under an enormous 90% and gradually oscillated to exactly 90% in 1998 before hovering around
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level for eight
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and escalating to a gigantic 96% in 2010.
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, the oldest group was a minuscule 40% in 1990 and levelled off until 1992;
besides
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, dramatically surged and ended the period at approximately 60%. What is interesting to note is that in the first year, both groups were different by more than 2 times.
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, the fraction of 26-
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34-year-old
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old people started at well over 60% and soared to reach its peak in 2002. A noticeable drop was seen after 2002 and arrived at roughly 73% in 2010.
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but not least, the 35-49 range accounted for nearly 60% in 1990 and swang
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shooting up to a massive 85% in 2010. What is surprising to see is both of them had the same percentage in 2005.
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