The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart displays the sources of electrical
power
sources in four different nations: India,
Sweden
, Vietnam and Morocco in the year 2003.
Overall
, all countries share two major sources: fossil and hydropower,
while
India and
Sweden
show an addition of nuclear
power
. Hydropower consists the majority of
power
supply in Morrocco, contributing to 95%, followed by
Sweden
by 52%,
In contrast
, fossil fuel in makes up to more than half of the Vietnamees supply,
this
feature is
also
evident in India, where fossi make up 82% of its capacity.
On the other hand
,
Sweden
shows the least fossil usage among all by only 4%, yet the highest percentage of nuclear supply, where it makes up 44% of the
Sweden
power
,
this
is a huge difference to the Indian nuclear
power
, which only supply 4% of the country needs.
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