The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countriesin 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart displays the sources of electrical

power

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sources in four different nations: India,

Sweden

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, Vietnam and Morocco in the year 2003.

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, all countries share two major sources: fossil and hydropower,

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India and

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show an addition of nuclear

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. Hydropower consists the majority of

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supply in Morrocco, contributing to 95%, followed by

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by 52%,

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, fossil fuel in makes up to more than half of the Vietnamees supply,

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feature is

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evident in India, where fossi make up 82% of its capacity.

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Sweden

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shows the least fossil usage among all by only 4%, yet the highest percentage of nuclear supply, where it makes up 44% of the

Sweden

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power

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this

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is a huge difference to the Indian nuclear

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, which only supply 4% of the country needs.

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